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Ode To Aida

Posted March 17th, 2005 in Poetry by M


Sitting here, this sunny day,
thinking of you, so far away,
maybe tomorrow, or maybe today,
I can find some words, for me to say,
to you, who makes me feel this way.

Countries and continents may lie between us,
but what I ask, could come between us?

The world of you I want to discover,
your very essence, your glorious wonder.

The depths of you I want to explore,
today, tomorrow and forever more.

I want to be so near to you,
adore you, admire you and revere you.

Of all the ways to pass the time:

I wish to see the curve of your smile,
I wish to be lost in the depths of your eyes.

I wish to whisper, into your ear,
my every thought, my wish and my fear

Lucky and blessed and nothing less,
is to know and love your sweet finesse

Even as I began this poem before,
I find right now, if I truly recall,
that I love you just a little bit more…

  • http://www.beginsathome.com/journal Mama JunkYard

    That’s a nice poem M.

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/7568687 Wakanyi

    Aida you’re a lucky girl! Hang onto this one for dear life!

  • imn

    i agree so sweet!! – who knew you had it in you :)

  • Anonymous

    M, I heart you. A.

  • Anonymous

    Wish you noticed me …

  • Anonymous

    So who’s Aida :-/

  • http://spideyfun.blogspot.com nick

    1.Nice poem. its simplicity is the essence. usijali katarudi tena

    2.i think we have now seen it…thinker turnin poet?!?!?!
    first itina and mama-j change names. mshairi and acrobats change everything. Ms K gets 2 blogs!heck even i changed colors and now this?!?!?!

    3. :-)

  • http://kohcohshaven.blogspot.com Ms K

    WOW M, I never thought. That was beautiful and so sweet.

  • http://mshairi.com Mshairi

    beautiful…

  • Anonymous

    damn she put one one you!!!

  • http://guessaurus.com Guess

    Late to comment, but that was beautiful. Mmmmm

  • Anonymous

    I……….know Aida what bliss…..am all mushy…….oh to be loved!.

  • Anonymous

    Is Aida your wife? Schucks…I wanted to be your wife!!!

  • http://gishungwa.blogspot.com gishungwa

    is it a de javu or what since i just read your post de javu. I get the impression that the issue is the same though this one is specific to Aida( u lucky woman u).
    very sentimental.

  • munyanta

    maze ‘m’ your smooth. but ur making the rest of the men (me included) who cannot write poems look bad !!!

  • jungleman447

    whispering sweet nothings will get u whatever from her. just keep it rolling like a ball my brotha …